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half was female who junior students were. The selection was
performed based on their TOEFL test. In this research the writ-
ing was rated by Writing Scoring Guide which is applicable for
TOEFL/CBT/PBT TEST in which factors like being well-or-
ganized, using appropriate details, demonstrating syntactic va-
riety, and using appropriate word choice have been considered.
All three paragraphs of the participants, descriptive, compari-
son/contrast, and cause/effect were all rated by three raters who
were a researcher and two academic professors in each time of
rating-it is worth mentioning that the researcher and the other
two raters are all teaching English in academic level and ex-
perts in this field. It was a holistic writing evaluation. In order
to find out the degree of agreement between judgments of the
raters, the inter-rater reliability of the scores was estimated. The
purpose behind evaluating the relationship between language
proficiency and paragraph writing was to measure whether stu-
dents with advancing level of language proficiency have more
ability in paragraph writing, and how much this affects their
writing, that ,of course, we found that this hypothesis was acce-
pted; to prove this I should say a student who is proficient in
both grammar and vocabulary could be a successful writer sin-
ce the requirement to be a good writer is to practice and write a
lot especially to be aware of the most fundamental factors of
writing including vocabulary and grammar to build proper wri-
ting schemata and regulate writing process and also have high
self confidence that is only achievable through practice. The li-
mitations of this research are as follows: The gender of the
students is not controlled in terms of being male or female.The
number of the students is limit and the study is not done on a
large group.
Instrumentation
In the present study a TOEFL proficiency test, from TOEFL
ACTUAL TEST (October 2003), Nashre Ebteda, was used. It
consisted of 90 multiple-choice items in the two parts of struc-
ture (section 1, 40 items) and reading comprehension (section 2,
50 items). The allotted time was 1 hour and 30 minutes. An-
other measuring instrument which was used in this study was
self-esteem questionnaire, which was selected in order to test
subjects’ global selfesteem. The Coopersmith self-esteem in-
ventory contains 58 items: eight of which are lie items, (6, 13,
20, 27, 34, 41, 48, 55); items number (2, 4, 5, 10, 14, 18, 19, 21,
23, 24, 28, 29, 30, 32, 36, 45, 47, 57) are given one mark if they
are marked by “yes”, and they receive no mark if they are an-
swered by “no”. The rest of the items are marked in a reverse
order. The desirable score on this test range from 25 to 50. The
students chose one of the choices of “like me” and “unlike me”
that each was in the place of “yes” and “no” answer. Each of
the 58 items was scored on 2 points, ranging from 0 to 1 point,
which showed the most positive attitudes and the most negative
attitudes. The maximum score for this questionnaire was 50 and
the minimum was 0. The name of the students remained ano-
nymous. The researcher asked the students not to mention their
name to reduce the degree of anxiety producing from evalua-
tion. The translated sample of this questionnaire is prepared in,
but the students were just provided with the original copy of the
questionnaire. In addition, the SPSS software along with the
Pearson-product moment formula for the correlation coefficient
was used in this research, and also α-Chronbach index was
applied to examine the reliability among raters in this study.
Procedure
To pave the way for this study, several steps were succes-
sively taken.A General Proficiency Test consisted of 90 multi-
ple-choice items including 40 structure items and 50 reading
comprehension items were administered for 150 students then
the numbers of 80 students were selected. The allotted time was
1 hour and 30 minutes. In the present study a TOEFL profi-
ciency test from TOEFL ACTUAL TEST (October 2003), Na-
shre Ebteda, was provided for the students. In the second step,
Coopersmith’s Self-Esteem Inventory was administered to the
same 80 subjects. The result of the previous studies in Iran
showed nearly high reliability of 87% which proved the ac-
ceptability of the questionnaire in Iran. As participants answer-
ing the items, it was found that some of the students had prob-
lem with some of the items of self-esteem questionnaire. For
example, they did not know how to answer the items which
were negatively worded. Therefore, during the administration
the testees were provided with an example. They were told that
providing “yes” answer means that the item was corrected, no
matter it has a negative or positive verb and vice versa. In other
word a “yes” answer indicates that the item describes the tes-
tee’s feeling. In the same way, a “no” answer indicates that the
item does not describe the testee’s feeling.
The Coopersmith self-esteem inventory contains 58 items:
eight of which are lie items, (6, 13, 20, 27, 34, 41, 48, 55);
items number (2, 4, 5, 10, 14, 18, 19, 21,23, 24, 28, 29, 30, 32,
36, 45, 47, 57) are given one mark if they are marked by “yes”,
and they receive no mark if they are answered by “no”. The rest
of the items are marked in a reverse order. The desirable score
on this test range from 25 to 50. The students chose one of the
choices of “like me” and “unlike me” that each was in the place
of “yes” and “no” answer. Each of the 58 items was scored on 2
points, ranging from 0and1point, which showed the most posi-
tive attitudes and the most negative attitudes. The maximum
score for this questionnaire was 50 and the minimum was 0.
In this step, the subjects were asked to write on three differ-
ent topics, the researcher tried to choose specific topics related
to psychology, so that they emerge their self. All three topics
were related to expository writing: descriptive, comparison/con-
trast, and cause/effect writing. It took 1 hour 20 minutes for
each paragraph. Needless to say because 2 of those topics were
established in two parts as it is shown, comparison/contrast, and
cause/effect, while the students were writing, there was some
misunderstanding on writing topics; therefore, they were clari-
fied to the point. It needs to be mentioned that since these kinds
of three different writings (descriptive, comparison/contrast, and
cause/effect) are dealing with more than one paragraph ,so the
researcher asked the students to write at least in two paragraphs
in order to convey the format of these kinds of writings . After
that, the researcher and the other raters who were all university
English teachers rated the participants’ writing samples. The
researcher and other raters evaluated the writing of the students
using TOEFL rating score. Then, In order to find out the degree
of agreement between the judgments of the raters, the in-
ter-rater reliability of the scores was estimated. The results in-
dicated that there was a high inter-rater correlation between the
scores of the two raters.
Data Analysis and Interpretations
Analysis N o. 1
In order to answer this research question: is there any rela-
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